Can I repair this torn shirt? Mending & full garment transformation!

Hi everyone, this week, I'm trying to save a friend's shirt! She was very sad her shirt got torn and I believe that sewing could come to the rescue. What do you think of my mending? Would you have mended it differently? What about the transformation? Happy mending, Noémie xx 🍵 Want to tip me a coffee? You can do so on my Kofi page 👉 https://ko-fi.com/lafraisesews Patterns mentioned: Tank top https://fabrics-store.com/sewing-patterns/phoebe-linen-tank-pattern-type-pdf Ogden cami https://truebias.com/collections/all/ogden Agustina blouse https://fabrics-store.com/sewing-patterns/agustina-boxy-top-pattern-type-pdf 00:00 Intro 01:29 PSA 01:50 The brief 02:35 Gameplan 05:27 Interfacing 06:34 Mending 13:00 Back to the drawing board 16:43 Pattern issues 21:39 Back yoke 24:10 First try 26:43 Lower neckline